Romantic & Hot.
Wonderful. Love it!
Thanks sammysslave.
Just perfect
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this one!!
-sammysslave-
Awww. That was hot. And very sweet. I LOVE first times - they are special. And this one was perfect. *happy sigh* Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate such kind words. I also enjoy first times and am glad you enjoyed this one.
-sammysslave-
This story was simply exquisite. Well done. Loved each chapter especially the last one, when Dean was so honest with his feelings. ~DeansHot
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Dean has so much emotion and love writing about it. I am glad you enjoyed it.
-sammysslave-
Amazing, I loved it. I was begining to worry when Sam got so mad about Dean reading his journal but you made it okay again.
Author's Response: Thank you! I just love happy endings and try to write our boys as being that way. I am so glad you enjoy it and appreciate the FB!
-sammysslave-
Okay, so first i want to say that i loved this. Really well done.
Next and my only critique is you do whats called "swapping heads" You tend to switch POV back and forth. Hope that makes sence, cuz if you can get the POV thing right, then the story and the writing of it would be just perfect.
But really, i really loved this.
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate when someone gives me FB that I can use to improve. I will work on that and I am glad that you enjoyed the story.
-sammysslave-
sooooooooooo perfect!!!
i loved each chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I absolutely love the FB and appreciate your time to let me know.
-sammysslave-
I love it, romantic and slushy, and I love all the cuddling and snuggling! Perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it and appreciate your time to leave me FB!
-sammysslave-
Yes, Dean did a good thing at being nosy and it all turned out *much* better than okay. Nice hot sex with a touch of romance and mushy Dean...and I loved this:
Dean sighed, one of these days he was going to handcuff the two of them together and by God they were going to work this crap out. Hell he would hold a gun to Dad’s stubborn head if that would get him to listen to Sam and just talk to him.
And I think you should write it cause it would be a hoot and a half! Looking forward to whatever you come up with next....Huntress
Author's Response: Thank you for such kind words *blushes to a bright red*! I might just have to work on that story, it could be interesting....
-sammysslave-
So hot and so beautiful. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it!
-sammysslave-